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Review:Iellwen says:
Hey Kayla!
In the name of the House Cup 2014, I review thy story! :D

So I was drawn to this specific one-shot (which is good because I just simply didn't know which one to choose first^^ YOU HAVE SO MANY INTERESTING LOOKING STORIES!!! I'll just have to stalk your AP ;) ) because of the To Kill A Mockingbird quote, especially because the quote you got is simply awesome :D
I'm not a guy, but even I feel uncomfortable around groups of girls, so I can totally relate to Ernie ^^

I love that you used the Yule Ball as the setting because I just love the nervousness the student body went through as they were looking for partners and I think you've expressed Ernie's nervousness very well!
Also, I love that you brought forth that pompous side of his Hufflepuff self xD

Justin is such a good friend, helping Ernie get a 'date' (I'm not sure, does the Yule Ball can count as a date? ^^' Anyway) and pushing him to act before it's too late!

I also love that you added descriptions about the other dancing couples, that you didn't just focus on Ernie and his going to the Yule Ball with Eloise, because I feel that set the plot in an even realer, credible light.

The interactions between Eloise and Ernie were really cute and the perfect amount of awkward ^^

Indeed, I very much enjoyed reading it; I love reading calm pieces from time to time, it's good for the soul!! :)

*Gee

Author's Response: hehe, I don't mind if you stalk my AP ;)

Haha, yeah I'm a girl but I get very scared when I have to face a pack of young teenage girls! I don't know what it is about them, but they're terrifying, haha!

Yes, the Yule Ball of course counts as a date! :P

Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

- Kayla :)


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