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Review:Infinityx says:
HI. I AM HERE NOW.

Wow, this chapter is just a huge bomb of emotion. Why do you do this to my heart? The chapter starts on a happy note when Hermione is thinking about all the shopping she has to do, and then...dun dun dunnn...enters the evil lavender and the gullible Ron. (I was going to use stronger words but 12+) Poor Hermione. When I read the line I had already lost Ron to her, but did I really have to lose Harry too? I cried. I really did. That was such a simple but powerful way of conveying what she was feeling.

I love the way you've described Hogsmeade. The imagery used is just beautiful.

Aw, Mr Bleakly is the sweetest! I love the way he cares about Hermione to the extent that he's giving her his wife's books! And that story. :') SO MUCH FEELS ERICA. That was my favorite part of the story so far and Mr Bleakly is my favorite character now. You should write a story about him!

Yay, Draco and Pansy broke up! It would be cool if you could give a bit more detail on why she began suspecting him. Maybe someone else who had a grudge against Draco or someone who had a crush on Pansy found this to be an opening to break them both up and fed Pansy lies! Okay, my thoughts just ran away from me there.

BUT EXCELLENT WORK WITH THE CHAPTER AND I LOVE THE WAY YOUVE ENDED IT. UPDATE SOON SO THAT I CAN LEAVE ANOTHER GUSHING REVIEW.

~Erin

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Author's Response: I guess I didn't really realize how much emotion that I put into this chapter but it is honestly how I felt Hermione was feeling during this time in canon. She does feel like she sort of "lost" Ron to Lavender and of course if Harry hangs out with them, then she feels like she has "lost" him too. Ah the fact that you say you loved the way I described Hogsmeade really makes my day. I really wanted to work on improving the amount of description I used in this story so the fact that you liked it is awesome!

Now we come to Mr Bleakly. To be honest, I'm not really sure where he came from, but I'm pretty proud of him. I feel like he's gotten to know Hermione throughout the years, she is probably one of the few Hogwarts students to actually spend time in his shop, and of course he sees his wife in her. I'm definitely considering writing a one shot about him. Maybe to get over my writers block I'll go and write something about him today!

Gosh this review is just so awesome and I'm really glad that you are liking this story. Its my baby so I'm always really happy when people give it a chance and find it enjoyable! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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