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Review:Lostmyheart says:
Hi again!

I've reached chapter six, and I still like how this story is progressing.
I laughed a bit, when Hermione followed Draco and when she bumped into him she just said 'oh' and turned around. I mean, what? Haha :D That was so adorable, here she is, the school's most clever girl and all she says is 'oh' and turns around, trying to pretend it wasn't that big of a deal.
I also liked that she didn't know where she was. It just showed that Hogwarts is a big castle, and even after so many years, it's still not easy to know where you are and that you haven't been able to see all of it yet. It may also stick to her character, as she's that kind of a person that likes routines and just goes to classes, the common room and the library - no need to go anywhere else.

I sense a Neville/Luna romance coming up. It was a sweet detail when you mentioned Neville looking at Luna, even when she wasn't talking. I liked that :)

Now I'm off to the seventh chapter! And I'm probbaly going to bombard you with several reviews during this event and after it :)

- Avi

For the HOUSE CUP 2014 REVIEW - EVENT 5

Author's Response: So the scene with Draco and Hermione has now changed in this update, trying to make it a bit more realistic so that its not just a random moment that she suddenly decides to follow him, but that there is more of a reason behind it. But I am glad that you liked the section that I had between the two and found it enjoyable. Yeah I'm definitely a sucker for Neville/Luna, I just think that they are so cute together and I don't care that Neville is supposed to be with Susan for me it will always be Luna, even though I have ideas for a Neville/Susan short story.

These reviews that you have left for this story are absolutely wonderful and have really made my day! The fact that you are taking the time to read and review each chapter is really amazing and its really cool see your responses to each chapter! Thank you so much for taking the time out to do that!

~Slytherinchica08~


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