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Review:MischiefNotQuiteMannaged says:
So no psychic paper then.

I think you've done a really good job at merging the scene from both Al's and Taryn's perspectives without it becoming repetitive.

I enjoyed reading Harry and Al's relationship (especially the mock salute), it's nice to see that Harry now has people who love him and are worried about him when Dean died.

I found Al's habit of remembering everything about those he goes out on a mission with poignant. You also handled Bella's response to seeing her dead father elegantly.

I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope you update soon!

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Author's Response: So this review is just awesome! The fact that you think I did a great job with both povs is pretty amazing! I'm glad that you liked Harry and Al's relationship, I think that the two would be close to each other, so its always nice when others think that its a nice relationship. With Al, I think he is a bit like Harry, worried about the other people on his team and each one touching him, so losing any of them would be a huge thing. Thanks again for this wonderful review!


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