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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey!!! :D

I love reading your stories in second person. I do. They're just so brilliant. And this being in the PoV of a Fwooper rather than a human just makes it even more awesome. It does.

Aww, the poor Fwooper. Taken from her home and put in a Silenced cage in a shop. That's just mean. Thank goodness Roxanne comes along to set her free. She's right, it's not the Fwooper's fault her song drives people insane. I'd set her free, too, just for hearing about her chicks. The evil people.

I love Roxanne. She's just so... innocent and good and does what's right because she just knows it's right rather than thinking of her actions and the consequences. I'm sure there'll be something for sneaking out, breaking into a shop and setting free one of the animals. But to not do it would have been worse somehow. I can just imagine her not accepting the very idea of not going through with her plan. Did she even wonder?

I loved this!


House Cup 2014 Review.

Author's Response: Hello, awesome. :D

Awww, thank you so much! I thought second person narration would work best for the Fwooper, in order to shroud her identity at the beginning of the chapter, and it felt a natural choice. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Yeah, I took inspiration from real life (like elephants being killed for tusks, tigers for rugs, etc) and the poor Fwooper deserved to live happily ever after, not in a cage with her voice taken away. Roxanne just couldn't have /not/ helped. To be that vulnerable is scary, and a friend like her is one in a million. The Fwooper will never forget. :)

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