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Review:Karou_Marauder says:
Hello again! You are an extremely powerful writer, you know that right? I hope people have told you that, because it's true. Seriously, the imagery and similes here are amazing. And your word choice, too.

"The angular shards of it slice through the towering waves making it seem as if the waves are the prey, not the predator, this time round." This shows us what Azkaban is. Azkaban preys on the burdened and makes them re-live their burdens and wrongdoings and hardships over and over and over again. It preys on the mind, and this is a stunning representation of it. And I love the way you link Sirius's fate to the beard. (Is it his or someone else's? I wasn't quite sure of that.)

The lyrics work very well here too. Maybe you meant for this to happen, or maybe you didn't, but the rivers in the song seem to relate to the North Sea between Sirius in Azkaban and Peter in Hogwarts/The Burow? Yeah.

Pff, happiness? Nah. Let's be sad! :P

-Karou, 2014 House Cup Review

Author's Response: Hi again! Aw, thank you so, so much that comment seriously made my day as it was so sweet and lovely and if I could hug you right now, I would! ♥

Ha, yes, it was rather fun to give Azkaban human like characteristics because in a way it is with the way it sucks you in forever and ever. The beard was someone else's so perhaps I should look that over again so it's definitely clear.

Aw, I'm glad that you liked the lyrics! I didn't intentionally mean for those to link to that but I'm glad they did for you. I chose to include them as they inspired this song for me and I really loved it so that's why they were here.

Thanks for this amazing review! ♥


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