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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
No but the questions are who are you what even is this HOW HAS THIS NOT BEEN UPDATED?!?! UPDATE PLEASE THANK YOU THIS IS SO GOOD. inhale exhale omg EHEHEHE. Ok i shall leave a proper review now.

First of all, let's take a moment to appreciate your super hot banner yeah? The blue is beautiful but wait SO IS YOUR STORY. Like wow how does your brain work? These ideas this... story is so brilliant. Not only stylistically but also like, words you know.

We also need to address ahem first of all, the way you write Draco. I imagine his character as extremely complex after becoming a Death Eater and having so many problems and tricks in his mind and behaviour. The opening was amazing, how he was "already bored". I love how you describe Astoria as not pretty and rather mousy and it's a definite contrast of most characterizations of Astoria you know?

The twist at the end was what took me aback! She's a legilimens! I think that's so smart as it ties in with Draco and his death eater days and fighting that. Like, wow.

All in all, beautiful writing. The way you work words is absolutely breathtaking. I know you're popular on hpff and me saying it doesn't really make a difference, but if you were to ever publish a book I'd totally read it. Um, yeah ♥

Great, fab work. I loved reading this and update soon? :)

House Cup 2014 Review
~Go gryffies!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you :') I've been terrible about updating anything, but I wanted to put up this chapter because it is a standalone stream-of-consciousness-like story for most of it until you get to the end, heh. Also after I made the banner, then I was just perpetually itching to post the story.

I love Draco as this very bitter character who has to live up to his sins but also forgive himself and build a future from rubble. I have no idea how most Astorias are--I only have experience with peppersweet's Astoria--but I like her as this deceptively mundane heroine, someone who takes up the complexity that Draco usually gets. It's usually the girl trying to figure out Draco, but here, it's Draco figuring out Astoria. She's been lying to him this whole in a way, and suddenly she has a touch of darkness to her as well.

Thank you so much for your review! ^__^ I'm writing an original story based on one of my fics soon, so I am trying to get published--maybe one day!

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