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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi!

Um, can I just say that I'm reviewing this on the second round of reading it because I cried too much the first time? Like all I can say about the first half of the story is heart. break. I don't even know. I mean, I wanted to hold Molly the whole time. When she went to Lucy's and Hilarion brought her to her parents and everyone panicked and she just went straight for Lucy because she didn't want anyone else. I kind of snickered when Percy was listening in. The scene between him and Molly was adorable. Heartbreaking, but adorable.

I seriously cried the whole time. I didn't stop crying until she went to practice. Just kidding, I was kind of crying still.

I love that she was late. That's really... Important, I guess is the word. I hate that Fitz is so blind that he thinks that she's okay. Like they're both living with this facade on and neither one can see that the other is totally miserable. I want to knock both of their heads together so they get that they're absolutely insanely in love. Ugh. Heart broken.

Awe, she left the table broken. Awe she wants Fitz there. ugh i want them to be a couple. Oh wow, is she going to change her hair? SHE'S CHANGING HER HAIR. WAIT. WHAT IS SHE DOING TO IT? I'm particularly curious. I loved the transition of this chapter and the way it ended, though. As broken as my heart is, as painfully short this review is (sorry, I have too many feels to be coherent and I couldn't completely re-read because I started re-crying, oops), this was a wondiferous chapter.

xoxo Sarah ♥
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Author's Response: Aww really? Making people cry is just as awesome as making people laugh - I do love to make some feelings happen, so thank you very much for that :D This is definitely a low point for Molly, and she just really needed her sister. As different as they are, they're so close and Lucy was the only one she wanted to talk to. Except of course until Percy butts in. I can totally see him eavesdropping on his kids to find out what they're up to. Especially when Molly's hysterical and she never cries - she does keep her deeper emotions to herself a lot.

Her being late is - and he knew it but tried not to let himself think about how significant it was, because he wants to convince himself he was right, that she didn't love him and would have dumped him eventually, because he needs to believe this was the best course and that he hasn't ruined his life here.

She did change her hair - more on that in the next chapter. This is a wonderful review, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this chapter, even though it made you cry.


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