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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi Kiana!

Aw, poor Anthony! I really suspected he was going to take his own life though, and I'm sort of wondering whether he was depressed and suicidal or if he truly was meant for death anyway and was just speeding up the process. It's hard to say what could have been, but I'm also hoping that they do go back for his body as well as Edward's and give him a proper funeral if they can, because he did truly die a hero in his way as well. And he also facilitated Scorpius surviving, though I suspect there's something else going on with all this fatal flaw business.

I feel like the fatal flaw of all the characters is either that they are too selfish or selfless, and can never exist somewhere in the middle. George and Charlotte were selfish, Scorpius, Anthony, Edward were selfless and noble, and nobody is getting a real happy ending because of it.

We didn't get to see any Frederic Russell in this chapter but I'm quite excited to learn more and why exactly he saw reason in sending Scorpius and Rose back in time, unless he felt the need to make the past come true and urge it along it's way. Hmm, I'm not sure, but there's definitely still some danger lurking and some mystery to be solved.

Congrats on finishing, Kiana! :) I'm excited to read the next chapter when you get the chance to post it! ♥

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Author's Response: Hi Jenna!

I think with Anthony it was a mixture of all those things as he was just so confused and didn't really know what was going to happen, but this idea of death seemed to solve them all for him sadly which is why I think he ended up going for that option.

Yes, the fatal flaw was a subtle hint to their characteristics as well as the actually plot so I'm glad you picked up on that! You really did get them right though, because I think it could be a norm with people either only caring for themselves or not at all, so as you said there never could be anymore of them.

Yes, Frederic Russell and Hermione and co. have sort of faded into the background for now but that should reappear soon in the next few chapters so don't worry!

Thank you, and thanks for this great review, hopefully the final one can be up soonish! ♥

-Kiana


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