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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi Rose! :)

Ahahha, I love how sneaky you were with not getting to the Brandon news until the end of the chapter and leading us on with all these fears that he could be dead. Silly me, I nearly fell for it too (well, nearly. I suspected you liked him too much to take him out just yet :P).

I'm still not quite sure how I feel about Corbin - I actually think this chapter showed his personality a little more and why he's acting so possessive: he's been hurt in the past and thinks that holding back will lead to him losing Scorpius, so that makes sense. Nobody is perfect, after all, and his past experiences can shape his current behaviour, so I'm still giving him a chance.

I'm glad Rose is back at her parents' and acting like an adult! It was fun seeing your business skills come through in the chapter and Rose's business plan seemed to fit quite well. I'm also so excited to hear more about her job and where she will take people as that just sounds so awesome and mixing travel with magic is great.

I honestly did not see Brandon's news coming at all - how awkward that poor Al had to hear from Harry, haha. Though I love how the story ties together with the mother of the kid dying and getting Brandon involved, and Bran being bisexual just makes the situation all the more complicated. I think Al was being pretty selfish and rude about the whole thing: I mean, of course it's a shock, but this happened before him and Brandon were together and Brandon is allowed to love whoever he likes: indeed, that's something Albus originally appreciated about him. It was sort of funny how that's what Al chose to rage against though, and it was fun seeing him quoting Brandon from Pure Intentions!

Absolutely loving all these speedy, exciting updates! I'm so excited to see how Brandon is taking the news that he's a dad and what will happen next with all these twisted relationships.

House Cup 2014

Author's Response: Would you have kept reading if I started the chapter with an update on Brandon? :P Okay... I was just being mean and wanted to drag out the anxiety about what happened to him. *nearly* fell for it isn't too bad. I mean, at least I didnt' cause mass-hysteria. I do like him too much for my own good though

Whoo!! I'm really glad Corbin's personality shon through a bit more here. I'm glad that you're willing to give him a chance at least. :) (some people just want him to die)

Rose finally came around and started to act a bit more like an adult. I always worry that I'll go too "oooh, business" with my characters. Let me know if I do that. :P

I'm glad the news was unexpected. When I thought of doing this, it seemed like soemthing no one would expect. Harry's involvement was mostly helpful while Brandon was discovering that he had a child. And, yeah, it was awkward for Albus to hear this from his father. Albus' reaction is quite frustrating but he does get better about it, I promise!!

I am still hoping to finish this for JulNo! So, hopefully you won't have to wait long for more.

Thanks so much for stopping by for the HC and for the lovely review!!


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