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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

So, I gather that this story was either written before DH or disregards it, and that's so interesting! In the first chapter, I really liked how Snape was actually shown to be supporting Voldemort and his actions, and it shows that dark side to his character with prevails until his Worst Memory in DH shows a different side to him. But also, he does have a more caring side in how he helped Draco and felt some guilt towards betraying Dumbledore, so you did a good job of showing those elements of his character.

I also really liked the spooky setting of the castle and how Voldy made it very eerie and gothic. I could really see the scene in my mind and it was chilling! It also contrasted well with this chapter and the scene with the students so that was quite interesting as well.

I love how Ron complimented Neville here! Ron's always bumbling over his words but I liked how his outburst here showed his loyalty and respect for Neville. I also really liked how you wrote Hermione: her sophisticated and sometimes slightly complicated language fit really well with her character and the knowledge she bears. I especially liked the references to Muggles, that felt very Hermione-esque.

Rebuilding the DA is an awesome idea and I'm so curious to see how this would change the layout of DH and stop Voldemort. While Harry's individual tasks are daunting it's also true that he needs a lot of help from his friends and his community, so building an army to oppose Voldemort and fight back on the aggressive front is very intruiging.

Great job with this, hopefully I'll be back to read more soon! :D

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