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Review:newgenerationlover says:
Hello! So now I realize why this fic is so good, it's because you wrote it!! (One of the few whom I've made one of my favorite authors ;) ). And all I can say is this story does not disappoint me whatsoever.

Ok, so I know that I said this in my review for chapter one, but truly, you don't know how happy I am that you are not doing a love triangle where one of them are obviously the horrible choice for James. I have read so many stories with a similar outline to this, but this one shines among them because, though James and Ash (sorry, like the shortened name ;) ) aren't perfect for each other, they are still somewhat good and could make each other happy in the end.

Oh, and just one little mistake I noticed was in the very end of the first section, you say "drinking now on the behalf of my engagement and end of my bachelorette ways." and unless James had a sex change we don't know about, I'm guessing you meant 'bachelor ways' ;).

Ah! I can't wait to meet Noah! I wonder what she will be like XD I'm patiently (*read: impatiently*) waiting for the next chapter :P

-Mary
House Cup 2014 Review

Author's Response: That has made me happy! I'm glad I'm one of your "few" favourite authors, haha .making me blush.
And I'm trying to like emphasise that, that him and Ashleigh like could actually work - you'll see more of it in the next few chapters hopefully. And little tensions where you think o maybe not mwhahahahahah .
And I know, I'm an idiot hahah I'll change it to bachelor straight away, cause like you said I don't think James needs a sex change or has had one (to my knowledge anyway) haha.
And Noah will shortly be on her way. He's just got to find her first so that'll be fun!
I have the next lot of chapters written so I'll upload theme asap, so keep an eye out!
Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot!!!


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