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Review:patronus_charm says:
House Cup 2014 Review!

Ok, as a prior warning Iím going to go to bed after leaving this review so sorry if itís incoherent/endless rambling/whatever :P

Haha, I loved how all of their names were connected to their ancestors. Iím usually on the fence about doing that, but I really loved it here as I could see aspects of Remusí and Doraís character come out in the children and it was really cool. Also, all of their chaos made me laugh a lot as you just wrote it so well and truthfully and I felt so sorry for Teddy and Victoire with having to deal with all of that!

Ahaha, I loved the fact that Johnny wrote to his aunt Rose to make her come along it just made me crack up so much just to see how he was already capable of doing that. Rose made me laugh so much too and I really loved the dry humour she had, because even though it was only for a tiny bit it still was so great.

Ok this line Ď"Johnny doesn't need friends," Uncle Scorpius murmured. "He has an army of minions."í I never knew Scorpius would be so good at snarky comments.

I loved Johnnyís superior knowledge when it came to Hogwarts and the Sorting as it reminded me so much of those days when children really thought they knew it all and had it all sussed out, so seeing him go through that stage made me crack up a lot!

Ahaha, this made me laugh way too much, and I think I might have to go and read the Midnight Run series soon!

-Kiana

Author's Response: It's totally coherent! I enjoy rambling, so I'm good with that.

I don't picture anyone else really going the whole named-after-relatives route (except Fred naming a daughter Georgiana after his dad, I totally picture that happening), but Teddy and Victoire, yes I do. Just like his godfather, he picks his people first - Remus and John and Nymphadora - and then Victoire gets to pick a name for her dad.

Johnny's "invitation" to Rose was probably something like: "The train leaves at 9 o'clock so you should be there before 8:30 to make sure you don't miss me. I may not have much time to talk to you, cause I'll be very busy, but you can wave to me." Cause he's an egomaniac. XD

Scorpius's ability to snark is directly related to his ability to be with Rose for a decade haha. And he finds Johnny hilarious.

Johnny definitely thinks he knows everything. He needs someone to take him down a few pegs. A lot of pegs.

If you do read it, let me know what you think! I hope you like it :) Thanks so much for the review!


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