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Review:patronus_charm says:
House Cup 2014 Review!

Hi, I thought you deserved some reviews after all the hard work youíve put in for the House Cup, so here I am!

Wah, this one-shot was perfect! It was just amazing and made me have so many cute and fluffy Romione feels that I donít currently know what to do with myself, so sorry if this review is really incoherent!

I really loved the first section and all the what ifs surrounding like what if Molly had given and Ron hadnít mown the grass, would there ever be a thing such as Romione? Ha, it just made me laugh that this was probably the best chore he ever did. I really loved Fred and George too and you just wrote them so well with their banter and teasing.

I think I almost preferred Hermioneís section because sheís usually with Harry and Ron so we never get to see her girly girl side but just her scholarly one, so it was so sweet to see her squeeing over a topless guy. The inner battle in her mind about whether she should actually be feeling these things was so funny too. Good old Ginny though with her secret laughter.

Seriously though, you wrote all of the Weasleys so well I really am in awe because for such a tiny piece you really developed their characters so much! This was such a great one-shot, so Iím going to head off and read more of yours now!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do love reviews. :) House Cup was fun this year.

I have to admit, the first section was sort of a lead-in, and Hermione's section was the point of the story, for me. So it's totally ok to prefer that bit! It's fun to show her girly side. Ginny was totally mocking her for drooling over Ron, lol.

Thanks so much! I do love to write the Weasleys. They are definitely my favorite characters. I really enjoy the relationship between Ron and Hermione, so it's fun to write. Thanks for reviewing!


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