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Review:dracodarlingxx says:
GODAMMIT I KNEW SHE WAS PREGNANT!!!
AND OMG SHE'S GOING TO SEE HER DAD! WHO'S GOING TO ASK ABOUT THE LETTERS! AND SHE'LL BREAK INTO SCOR'S LOCKED DESK DRAWER AND FIND ALL THE LETTERS! AND CRY! OR BE ANGRY! THIS IS BAD. VERY BAD.
argh.
so this linda chick's a real seer, yeah? which means that bowlky is going to die soon (!) in a grey building with a window (:'))
ron's been a bit of an idiot, but i hope he doesn't die.
and maybe we'll see harry at the hopsital (hopefully not hurt too), 'cos i do want to see harry :D
but i do love this chapter, and Rose was so cute when she was ill, and Scor was just cute in general :*
please update soon xx
p.s. i loved the bit where Rose told Scor where his clean socks were, like a typical married couple :)

Author's Response: I will say that she is going to see her dad, but he probably isn't going to do much talking, that is unless I change my mind while writing the chapter, which has been known to happen occasionally. As for her reaction I will say that neither of those will be her first reaction. Obviously she is going to mad, which she has a right to be, but him keeping letters isn't going to be what makes her angry.
As for Linda, I took a Professor Trelawney approach, she cant sometimes be right, but she is sort of a joke.
Ron's a bit of an idiot, but at the same time I always son Ron as a character who has always realized his mistakes eventually. Like when he quit talking to Harry in HPGOF because he was jealous that Harry's name was chosen, and when he left in HPDH, he came back and pulled Harry from the water. He is flawed but loyal, and that's why he has always been my favorite of the three. I just feel that with his daughter he is a bit more over protective, and I think he has a right to be upset about her marrying Scorpius because Ron only ever saw the outcomes of Rose & Scors fights, he never saw them together, and he has never seen Scor as anything but a guy who has physically and magically hurt his daughter, which is his flaw.
I hadn't planned on Harry being there, but I don't know why because he is Ron's best friend, so... thanks for bringing that to mind.
The scene with Rose sick was something that came to mind a while back, I never intended to use it because it wasn't plot moving, but then when I decided to cut the 2nd book short and expand it the last arc into a 3rd, I realized with what I had mapped out it could work as maybe hinting at symptom for something you mentioned above, but not entirely confirm. Im going to try to have an update sometime next week. I want to finish ch. 11 for Twelve first and send to my beta before I start writing ch. 28 & 29, of confronting. Anyways thank you for reviewing, made my day. Also glad you liked the socks because they are a typical married couple.


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