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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi again Amanda! Wow, this was such a different story to read for the every word counts challenge and I'm so impressed with your writing and the way you manage to write such different pieces.

This was really scary and creepy and I felt so bad for Sirius as I was reading this. I thought that you explored the reasons behind this and the connections that the fear of this writing desk created for Sirius. I liked the fact that it reminded me of the Boggart that was in the writing desk in the Order of the Phoenix because it makes sense then for him to fear it, but he doesn't know that at this point and there's all sorts of connections to his family there which he can't sever. It's no wonder when he grew up with things like this constantly around him and affecting him that he had such a tough time at home, and it's hardly a good environment to grow up in. But I thought you wrote his fear incredibly well; it seemed tangible to me, and I could understand it and feel sorry for Sirius as I read about the terror it caused him.

Sian :)
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Author's Response: Hey Sian, thanks for coming by!

I'm glad that you enjoyed this one-shot. I was directly inspired by the Order's experience with the writing desk in OOTP, and I thought it would be a cool moment to explore for a short piece. I agree that it explains a lot for him to have grown up in an environment full of fear and tension.

Thanks for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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