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Review:patronus_charm says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Ok, the first section really got me again. Seriously, I’m just going to end up in a ball of tears after reading this but I think it was just the way Charlie got so excited about going to the park as it was just so simple but so cute, and Lavender could finally get excited too and she was having her life back and Parvati was coming along. It was just too emotional :P

The first flashback got to me as well because it felt as everything was becoming a full circle as we saw what happened during the war and quite a bit after and now we got straight away after, and it was so solemn and sad I wanted to hug Lavender as she was so strong. When she started crying, you just wrote it so simply it really hit home and it was really wonderful! The memorial flashback was written beautiful too. The way one name just came after the other was so symbolic as it showed what their life was reduced to in the public eye but then we had Lavender’s thoughts to provide more meaning.

Michael Corner ♥ and this quote ‘“They’re pretending,” he says. “They’re all pretending, every day. Because if we pretend for long enough, eventually it will come true. And then everything will be alright. We’ll escape the darkness.”’ Both reduced my feels to crumbles and like Nadia said in her review I am shipping them both so bad as he was just this wise Claw who could sort out everything in her life and put her back together again and it just such a lovely scene with the two of them together.

This was such a fantastic story, Sian, with a wonderful story in Lavender’s life and the quote fitted in with all the chapters. I really enjoyed reading this :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi Kiana!

Oops, I didn't mean to make you quite so sad with reading this story, I thought Charlie was one of the happier parts of it :P But I'm glad that you liked the way they went to the park and it was kind of a return to normality.

I'm so happy that you liked the flashbacks in this! I was worried they'd make things too stilted but I felt like they were important to show what was happening to Lavender. I was so proud of her for carrying on in spite of everything that she's been through. And the memorial's something that could happen in a few of my stories and it makes me sad to think of but I'm glad you liked it!

Yes, Michael Corner! ♥ And it's great that you're shipping them because for some reason the two of them have been together in my head canon for absolutely ages, but I just see him here as someone she can actually relate to and who can help her move forward now.

Thank you for all these amazing reviews, Kiana, you're wonderful! ♥


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