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Review:patronus_charm says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Ok, so many feels in this chapter, seriously it just made me go up and down throughout. The first flashback was so dramatic even though it was so short as you really caught the air of danger the Carrows gave out, and the necessity of hiding and it just written really well. Then we went onto the next section which was a really cute moment between Charlie and Lavender and had me awing away. But it was completely natural, the change, so it just flowed so well which was really good because often that isnít the case at all.

I really liked the scene with Parvati and Lavender, because again you managed to get in so many different emotions. There was the humour in there with you stank which had me laughing away, but then it became more serious and really delved into how they were both feeling which was really cool. I liked how we got to know more about Lavender though because it wasnít so much Greyback biting her which made her the way she was but the fact that she lived while others died. Thatís what gave me all the feels and fitted in with her being a Gryffie and wanting to be brave and protect everyone and that was just such a strong message there.

ďYou have a choice, Lavender. Thatís why itís easier for you to hide away, thatís why youíve felt like this for so long. Thereís nothing to stop you; itís all down to you. But you can choose. You can choose to live.Ē Ė ah this quote was fab and so, so, so true!

Ok and this quote too Ė ĎNo matter what happens, we are best friends. We will save each other.í Thatís what me aw and want to cry as it was so sweet and really gave me hope that Lavender could be well again and yeah I just loved it!

Whoo, onto the next chapter!


Author's Response: Hi again!

Aha, I'm going to take you having feels in this chapter as a good thing, even if it did make your emotions go a bit crazy! I'm really glad that the transition between the flashback and the cuteness with Charlie and Lavender worked out okay, because that was something I was worried about, even though I thought the flashbacks were necessary to show the horrors she'd experienced.

I really loved writing Lavender and Parvati's friendship in this piece, because it was great to show that it was founded on something much deeper than girlish gossip, especially after what they went through together under the Carrows. Yes, I've always felt like for anyone who was injured like Lavender, they came so close to death and it would be natural for them to have a lot of survivor's guilt to experience afterwards. I'm so happy you liked those quotes and the hope that it gave for Lavender!

Thank you for another awesome review!

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