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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Dropping by from review tag!

I remember seeing this plot in the up for grabs section and thinking it was so interesting, so I'm really glad you picked it up! You've definitely done a good job of showing what a jerk Albus is while justifying what has caused him to change from that sweet, shy boy we saw in the Epilogue. I felt so bad for his parents, especially Harry since I imagined his family would be very precious to him after not having parents for his entire life. This made me quite dislike Albus so I'm curious to see if there are darker reasons for his bad attitude and how he might develop more in future chapters.

Hmm, I wonder if the disappearing Floo powder might have something to do with the little girl. The term "angel" made me wonder if perhaps she was a ghost or some sort or a guardian angel rather than an actual person or child, or if perhaps she's somewhere in the middle. Ooh, was she Albus' daughter who died and then came back to make him a better person, Christmas Carol style?! That would be so cool, but maybe a little spooky. :P Either way, I'm really curious to see how she will be introduced.

Also, I thought you did a really solid job of explaining why the Floo powder not being there was such a big deal and why Ginny hated Apparating. That made sense, and I like it when details like that are explained and justified in the story.

A very interesting start, I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hey!

Yeah, it does sound interesting doesn't it? I'm planning to change it up a bit though and make it my own. Credit goes to ScarletEye158. Albus is portrayed as a different character in this book, from a shy innocent little boy to an idiot.

No Spoilers! But I like spooky stories ... they're scary ...

thank you for reviewing!

Emma


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