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Review:MuNition says:
EXCELLENT!

Finally, one of those rare authors with the courage to take a realistic look at the darker side of the James/Lily relationship. They are the pretty and popular girl, dating the most popular jock at school, and after a year, they're married, two, she's pregnant, and so on.

These relationships seem so glamorous to teens who think that once they discover love, they know something other people don't. That is, until they discover that reality is no fairytale. After a while, the faults start to surface, the self-delusion of confident youth begins to falter...

And to capture it so succinctly, in just one scene, is an achievement.

Author's Response: I agree that it's the rare person who looks at James/Lily in this light, and this was a fun challenge to set for myself. It was neat to explore the raw emotion and vulnerability that Lily might have felt in this moment.

Thanks for another kind review! Hope you drop by again later for another of my tales!

-Amanda


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