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Review:MuNition says:
Oh come on, I'm loving this story, but if you show the Gryffindors any more love while glossing over their faults (match to marauder: jock, thug, spineless, coward. It didn't even take you ten seconds and we both know you got it right) while doing the exact opposite to Slytherins I might seriously consider myself done here. A good dichotomy is fun, but it flattens out the characters.

Author's Response: I kind of have beef with you about this one, not going to lie. The original series treated Gryffindors well and Slytherins poorly because the book was through Harry's eyes. Same thing here: Beth is a Gryffindor. Her friends are Gryffindors. They're obviously going to be portrayed in a better light.

I myself am a Slytherin. It's nothing against the house. But I'm kind of surprised you kept reading if you had such a big issue with this. Sorry you found it "flat."

Thanks for reviewing.


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