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Review:crestwood says:
Hey, crestwood from the forums here for your requested review!

First off, I just want to say that this is an amazing idea. A muggle-born witch who comes from a family of brilliant scientists; what a premise! Judging from your account, you seem to be fairly new to this site, so I also want to give you a warm welcome :)

There are small grammatical errors throughout this chapter that, while not taking away from the story, could improve the presentation of it all if you had someone read over your work. Oftentimes two sets of eyes catch things that one person might miss. On this site, we call members who look over and help edit and improve writing (grammar, but also more general writing skills, plot ideas etc.) betas. For a story that you're planning on drawing out into many chapters it's usually a good idea to have one. And because I like, and believe in this story, I'd be very very happy to be your beta if you would like me to. I'm not exactly a perfect writer just yet, but I am very good at fixing and explaining grammatical errors and do like to think of myself as someone who can help with all areas of this site.

That being said, in areas such as characterization seem to be your strong suit. Annett's inner voice is strong and like I said, the plot idea is genius. This is a great set-up for an interesting story that will be unlike anything I've read. I feel great about the development of this. I really do.

Author's Response: I feel so welcome!

I will go over my chapters with a fine-tooth comb to weed out those pesky little errors.

Thank you for all your compliments and for and believing in my story. I will take you up on your offer to be a beta.

Cheers


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