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Review:Pia says:
Hi!

Dear Merlin! I think you just outdone yourself!!

Roses's fear is pretty obvious and heartbreaking and I just hope is not some kind of foreshadowing...

I'm loving this "new" Albus,to see a little bit of him beneath the ice curtain. The fact that he is his biggest fear shows that he actually cares (even if it just a little) for the consequences of his actions,especially regarding Rose, it seems to me that he is terrified of what he might do to her if he loses control.

Also, Albus's reaction when Rose said she loved him was so sad, given the Hannibalistic (pun intended) way he dealt with the Other, it seems to me that he thinks he is not worthy of any love at all, it's hate and pain he is expecting from everyone, even from himself.
Let's see how he deals with James rescue attempt...

And poor Rose, she is going to have to deal with her parents deaths all over again!

Keep writing as fast as you can! I can't wait to your favourite parts! :D

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was one of the tougher ones to write!

I really like your analysis of Albus; the fact his fear is himself shows that he does ultimately fear what he's capable of. Control is a big theme in the next chapter, so you'll definitely be getting more insight on that ;)

Oh yeah, Albus gettin' his Mr. Hannibal Lecter on haha.

Albus' reaction to being told that; it just came as such a shock to him and it's sad that he's come not to expect from anyone. Really good analysis.


Next chapter is called Grieve, so yeah, poor Rose...

Will do! As always, thanks for R&Ring!




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