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Review:newgenerationlover says:
Hi! Great start!! Ok, before I start the actually review, I just have to guess... Is the author of that book Ashleigh sister, the girl James falls for?? I'm thinking yes ;) Ok, now onto the actual review! This story is really quite original (well all your stories are honestly). Something about the dynamics between James and Ashleigh are different than anything else on this site. Yes, I've read my fair share of stories with James who start out dating his blonde bimbos, but, though he doesn't love her, he isn't just doing it for a quick rhymes-with-rag or only to get his parents off his back. He likes her just enough to go along with the wedding, if you know what I mean. which I guess you do as you are the one writing this. Anyway! I think you have set up a great story and I am very interested into finding out where it will continue :)
xoxo
Mary

Author's Response: Damn girl! How did you guess!!! It was that bit in the an wasn't it? I knew I shouldn't have put it, I just didn't want the chapter to get rejected damn, oh well 10 points to gryffindor (or your chosen house).
But yeah I'm trying to portray that, like he does like her, just not as much as he should, he's been with her for a while so that's probably what gives it away, hopefully.
And the mysterious sister will be introduced soon so that'll be interesting (I hope).
And thank you I do try to add a bit of originality to them aha. And again thank you I will try and update soon, THANK YOI FOR THE REVIEW IT MEANS A LOT!!!
Lots of love
Aimee :))


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