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Review:crestwood says:
This really made me feel so bad for Aries. Pretty much everything blew up in her face. James is absolutely insufferable out loud and even worse in the comfort of his own thoughts. And something tells me that Albus wasn't planning on called her a hookup until she suggested that was all the night was. Things went even worse than I thought they would, somehow. Although, Harley is still an awesome friend. I did change two small errors while reading, but they're a harmless typos. In the sentence "Almost all the sixth and seventh years of Hufflepuff expect the Scamander twins" expect should be changed to except, and in the A/N "Net-Gen" should be Next-Gen, but other than that, everything was perfectly written and paced. The characterization is solid and I found the story interesting. Thank you for your request! Make sure to re-request if you upload more!

Author's Response: Yes, things won't go well for Aries. James IS horrible and that what I want him to be (for now at least). Albus didn't want to call her a hookup. He had intentions of taking it further than a one-night stand like a friendship the least or dating (which he would have preferred). Harley eventually becomes the most awesome friend in the universe. And thank you for pointing out the typos. YOU are a life saver! I am actually going to edit them RIGHT NOW ^___^
Thanks a TON for R&R !

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