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Review:crestwood says:
Hey, crestwood from the forums here with your requested review!

I thought that Aeris as a character was a good depiction of someone with a strong obsession. She was so into James that even after he clearly used her and left her, some part of her was still incredibly excited to have had the opportunity at all.

Harley is hilarious and the perfect comedic relief. The scene where she pretends someone is calling her made me actually laugh and that's a rarity, even with full out comedy stories. Although James is not exactly a great guy, he does seem to kind of struggle with it and I can see that he may have a change of heart, especially if Albus comes into play like I think he will.

The flow is fantastic; the last paragraph especially. And you already have me trying to mentally decipher your characters, so that's always good. Awesome chapter overall!

Author's Response: HELLO! ^__^
I'm glad you could see her crush or thing for James is so strong that it is on a whole another level.
Harley is supposed to be the comic relief and is slightly whacky in her own way. I'm glad I could make you laugh with her considering that humor is not my strong point.
Yes, James is struggling. He loves the attention, but hates it b/c the attention is for the wrong reasons. Like they love him b/c he is a superstar, but not for who he is (b/c he is sorta rotten).
Thanks so much for R&R!

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