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Review:M says:
Man I just hate Avery. Everything about him just screams out creep. Major kudos for you though, as the writer, for making him seem so deplorable as a person.

It's also nice to see Dom back; it seems like she's finally moved on from the emotional trauma. With Georgia as well, I do love the friendship those three have.

I also have to commend you on your use of language to describe Charlotte's dress and her appearance with all of her make up on. The way you described the dress and her was so intricate, it made it so easy for me to imagine what she looked like in my mind.

Now that I've caught up with all of your updates for Risen, I'm going to head over to Puzzle Pieces...maybe tomorrow though, cause it's past midnight right now! Technically I should say later on in the day :)

Love the chapter and I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Hey!

Yes, Avery is a total creep. Not my favorite parts to write, but it's a necessary evil for the sake of the story. haha.

I'm basing Dom's journey off a friend of mine. She went through a very smilier situation, and was really depressed for a while, but then kind of just bounced back and went back to being herself.

Thank you for the kind words! You're the second present to comment on my ability to accurately describe things. so yay! Ego boost. lol.

I hope you enjoy Puzzle Pieces. It's a very different story.

Hope you had a great day, and I look forward to hearing what you think about the new story. :)

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