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Review:crestwood says:
In your requested review, you asked whether this chapter still holds interest when compared to the rest of the story and the answer to that is a pretty firm yes. It's, of course, very different from the rest, but only because it increases the stakes of all of the strange things that happen to Ellie.

I thought the discovery of the passageway was an interesting thing to read for sure. Occasionally I'd get a tad bit confused about what exactly was occurring, but after a quick reread that was always cleared up. The flow is nice, especially for a chapter that's essentially one scene throughout. All in all, really interesting so far. Thank you for the request and the chance to read this wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really, really happy that you find the story to still be interesting. I was worried because, as you said, it's different from the rest.

Goodness! The flow almost killed me in this chapter! And also how to make this essentially one super long scene interesting - so glad that it worked :D Thanks so much for all the lovely reviews!

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