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Review:newgenerationlover says:
Hi there!

This is a really good story! I've never read a story about a Hufflepuff that stands up for herself so much, I am really liking it. My favorite time that she told someone off is still the time with Albus. She told him exactly how it is (despite how much he may try to hide from the truth) and he was just dumbstruck.

So what's up with this secret club they were talking about on the train that I forgot the name to. Is it some secret society type thing or is it more of a place to party for people who know about it? Really interested into finding out.

Wait, so is Adam asexual? That would be very interesting if he was because I haven't read a single fic that touched on that subject. The only little CC I have is that you haven't really established Lian's relationships with her friends a lot. Yes we see little snippets of conversation, but I think it would help if we (us readers) got to see a full conversation with the backdrop of an activity that they really like or really hate and how they would complain or gush about it to their friends. We just need to see more because as of right now I don't really know what her friends are like. I want to see them go a little crazy when they are together and who is the jokester and who is the more silent observer and etc. I hope this makes sense.

However, we have gotten a lot of character development from Lian which I really like. She seems nice enough without being the stereotypical Hufflepuff super duper nice all the time person. She seems like she has a good sense of humor and the intelligence to get her into Ravenclaw. I can't wait to see what comes next in the story!

xoxo
Mary

Author's Response: Thanks fort the review! I plan on having much more about Lian and her friends, as well as the secret society. Yes, Adam is asexual. I'm pan myself and I think it's very important to have these types of characters in media without making it a plot point. Allison is going to be revealed to be a lesbian in the next chapter as well. In my story A British year I'm actually about to reveal one of the main characters is transgender. I hope you like it!!


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