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Review:MargaretLane says:
This hallucinating is beginning to get concerning. OK, that sounds stupidly obvious, but I'd assumed it was because she was drunk, but now it's beginning to seem as if it's related to her self-esteem issues.

At least Harley talks a bit of sense into Aeris.

And *laughs at the "finally"* They're still at school, after all. There are a fair share of people who've hardly been OUT with a boy or girl at that stage, but I guess considering how many people Harley's been with, it might seem like "finally".

LOVE the hints that Harley's interference hasn't exactly worked too well in the past. You give a real depth to your characters and a feeling that they don't just exist for this story, if that makes sense. There is a sense they've done other things and had lives before the story started.

I know Albus is angry because he feels Aeris doesn't like him and probably that she only used him because things didn't work out with his brother, but it's still not acceptable to use that kind of misogynistic language. Even if he doesn't really mean it about her (and I'm sure he doesn't), the fact that that comes to mind indicates he does feel differently about girls and boys doing the same things. After all, he's really criticising himself. If he had been telling the truth about what happened between them, it would have been HIM taking advantage of HER. I guess he'd rather she thought that than that she realised he fancied her, but still.

I'd still prefer see her get together with him than James though. I think he is a decent person, who just behaved badly because of how hurt he was, and because he's a teenage boy, who probably hasn't the maturity to realise how harmful those kind of comments are, whereas James seems to be pretty callous. And Albus does seem to really care about her, whereas James doesn't.

Author's Response: Well, in the morning she wasn't drunk. It was more like guilt. Like when you do something wrong, you are really sensitive to people around b/c of paranoia. Like you think they know. She was experiencing that type of thing.
Yes, there are many teens that go without that, but because its Harley who is much different from Aries finds that in a way is Aries breaking out of her comfort zone (although there are many other ways of doing that).
Albus was mean. Yes, Albus felt like what she said was rejection even though he didn't really confess. Anyway, thanks again for R&R!


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