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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi again Amanda!

I really loved the first section it was so haunting with the way you had an inkling about who it was and what happened but then there was a random Niffler there which just confuses it a little so you have all these pieces youíre just not quite sure how to put them together. Thatís why I loved the structure of this whole piece so much as it just piece things together so well.

The second section is what got to me because thatís what confirmed it was Oliver in a way as I had been secretly hoping it would be someone else. I really loved the little bit of romance going on there as this ship has always been a favourite of mine and it was interesting to see her reminisce about Hogwarts and everything else back from those days. It was so cute to see how awkward Oliver got when he gave her the Niffler, but you tied it in so well it didnít feel as if it was a prompt at all.

The sign of hope and inner peace at the end was really lovely as it showed that she did have her Gryffindor courage and that she could overcome this current obstacle. I really loved this one-shot, Amanda and it worked so well with the prompt so great job!

-Kiana

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