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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Emily, Iím going on a blitz of all the posted Claw stories and Iím at yours now :D

Wow, this was so god Emilly (the y bit was unnecessary but I needed to keep with the pattern :P), I honestly think this is your best piece yet as it was just amazing how you managed to sustain Grawpís narration throughout without any flaws because that is a massive feat. I really loved the second person POV and thought it went really well with Grawp, and added another layer to him and was generally just really good. Also, his narration was smooth and flowed throughout showing you really got and understood Grawp.

I loved the simplicity of his thoughts with how only memories of pain and love were present. The former really got to me as he thought about the people who were mean to him but the latter was actually quite cute when he thought of Hagrid and how much he meant to him and I got all sorts of feels. I also liked how much his thoughts focused on nature which was really fitting given how much time he spent in it.

Grawp and Fawkes seemed to go so well together even though they seem kinda random when you place their names together. Aw, Fawkes continues to be the cutest phoenix in the world with the way he went and saved Grawp and I just have really lovely images of him going round and saving everyone else now too.

This one-shot was really lovely, Emily!


Author's Response: Hey Kiana!

You are a reviewing machine. I am in awe. :D

Gah, I'm so glad that you think so! Gah, you flatter me so much, thank you for the amazingly lovely compliments! I'm really glad that you liked Grawp's narration! I do firmly believe that even if he didn't or couldn't vocalise his thoughts in the HP series, it doesn't mean that he's stupid, you know? So I'm glad that you liked the second person narration and Grawp's internal monologue. :D

Oh yay, and I'm so happy that you liked the way he thought! I did try to make it different from the way that we as humans might think, but not necessarily more stupid, if that makes sense? Just with a different emphasis on things, like those clear emotions and, as you said, nature. Hagrid + Grawp are the ultimate brotp, to be honest, because they clearly do care for one another and just gah yes so many feels.

Fawkes is the best phoenix and I've liked him ever since he gave Harry a massive shock in CoS, haha. And they both have w in the names! :P But yeah, these two are on the opposite ends of the magical creature spectrum, so I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading about their interaction anyway!

Thanks for an amazing review, Kiana!


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