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Review:patronus_charm says:
Jenna you are an updating queen, so sorry for these short by my standards reviews as itís the only way to catch up :P

Ooh, getting into Adaís mind was really interesting and I liked how you made her have a reason for each murder. Yes, it didnít justify them as Iím always against murder no matter what, but it did make me understand her a little more and that was really important so I could carry on liking her so whoo for that.

I like that the sevenfold idea is developing because it would be cool albeit in a twisted way if that was the case. I wonder if Harry not taking it as seriously as the others will affect the case or not. Hmm, I hope it doesnít. Yay for the hint of Scorose as youíve always got to love them, and I think that indicator about Scorpius and Draco being worried about it shows that Draco isnít the murderer unless this is a clever ploy.

Whoo for Nana Molly, she was fab! I loved learning more about all the history and stuff as well as it was really cool and I hope more comes soon as I have a feeling that everything is a lot more interlinked that I previously thought.

Woah the ending was dramatic with some lovely tension between Emily and Louis maybe it will finally help give them a nudge to get together? And another murder! Iím guessing Draco because it would make sense that he would die in my head for some unknown reason, so Iíll just read on and see!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi Kiana! Oh no way, you're a reviewing queen haha. I'm excited to catch up on all your lovely reviews again - thanks so much for coming by, it means so much to me!

I'm glad you like Ada and this helped you to understand her a little bit. She's not a bad person, not at all, though I'm a bit conflicted too as I don't condone murder either. But it's tricky to know for sure.

Yes, the sevenfold idea is starting to tie together! Scorose was going to be a bigger part but I just didn't have room to develop them further, but they're part of my head canon now so had to reference it. :P Draco's a slimy one, and definitely has some form of significance whether minor or major - though I can't say more than that. :P

Aw yay, I'm so glad you liked Nana Molly! She's so lovely to write and I just adore her as a character so showing her as a grandma was quite fun. I'm loving seeing your thought process with the mystery and how things are intertwined, it's so exciting for me to see if the clues I planted and everything are working.

Hehe, maybe! :P Although Louis should be concentrating on the murderer, not on romance, silly boy that he is. Interesting theory there!

Thanks so much for the amazing review, Kiana! ♥


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