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Review:patronus_charm says:
Here for the review swap!

Ha, I loved this one-shot! I loved how grumpy the old people all were with this line ‘“You’ll kill us all,” she was yelling at the young aide behind the buffet table. “Putting out sour milk. That’s just what you’d like, isn’t it!”’ as it just reminded me of how the few times I’ve helped at events like this they were very fussy over milk. I especially loved how the two of them went and tried to get revenge on her, albeit in a nice way, because only they would do that and it was just so great.

The healers made me laugh a lot as it seemed as if they were enjoying the mischief of Fred and George too even if they couldn’t really admit it and I loved that :P

Being the Claw that I am, I loved how you went into detail about their system as it was actually really interesting to read as they really did have it down in typical George and Lee fashion. It’s actually really sad that I could go on and on reading about their technique and how everything worked but you just wrote it in such a funny and interesting way that I wanted more and more!

I really hope there is a sequel to this with the way you left it and go Ravenclaw!

-Kiana

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I just had to put the antithesis of Lee and George in there, because you know for every kind old soul there's a crotchity one too. Haha!

I figured if I were working there, I would LOVE them, so they should too. +]

I wanted to do more! I really did! Word limits are my nemesis.

Sequel? Hadn't thought of that. Maybe after I get a few of my WIPs done I'll come back to it. +] Not a bad idea at all.

Thanks for the swap!


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