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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Wow. Just wow. Emily, you never cease to amaze me with your writing skills! I always love your stories and how you're able to put a different twist on usually glossed-over characteristics of the characters.

You've done a fabulous job of characterizing all of the Fleur/Bill clan! The once close, now somewhat strained relationship Dominique and Victoire have is really quite realistic even without the magical elements. I'm glad you didn't have her end up with Teddy--that's a little cliche and wouldn't fit right with the tone of the story.

Your OC muggle Jack! He's so kindhearted and trusting and caring and I wish I had a guy like that!! His blind trust in Victoire to tell him her major secret (magic) in her own time speaks volumes for his character. However, Victoire's distrust in her own self ultimately leads to her decision to leave him for his own safety, and I think that displays just how much she is afraid of her power and that she still has trouble controlling it after so many years.

So really REALLY well done with this, I can't wait to see just how amazing your others are! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

Author's Response: Oh my. Oh my. You're making me blush. ♥ Thank you so much for the amazing compliments!

Yay, I'm so glad that you think so! I've been reading quite a few next-gen stories recently, and seeing Victoire and Dominique as supermodel pretty ALL THE TIME kind of made me wonder what negative effects Veela blood might have and so this story was born. And yeah, I wanted Victoire to end up with someone else for one instead of Teddy, as much as I might love the guy.

I KNOW RIGHT pls tell me where I can find such a lovely guy for myself, haha! But wah, Victoire just doesn't trust herself enough to accept herself and just let it be. I'm really glad that you picked up on her pretty much deathly fear of her own power, because I wasn't sure if that came across enough in the story.

Wah, thank you so much for the lovely review, amazing person!! ♥

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