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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey Missy! I'm here to review your Writing Challenge entry! :)

This was a really interesting story! I don't normally read stories from this kind of perspective but it was really cool! I never would've been able to write a story like this because I would just get way too confused :p

I liked that it was from Draco's POV also. I never really thought of Pansy being the one to break his heart and it made it a really interesting thing to think about!

I just have one small piece of CC for ya! I was a bit confused as to where Draco was watching Pansy from.. did he have an invisibility cloak or something? Was he watching from a window or a glass? It shouldn't be a hard thing to fit into the story to explain, but it did leave me a little bit confused!

I really like how the story showed that it was hard for Pansy getting a job. I'm guessing it was because of her history with the Dark Arts? I can imagine that a lot of people would be afraid and probably biased towards those who used to follow Voldemort or have family members who did, so I like that you added that part in there and showed how nervous she was about it all!

anyways, this was a great story! It couldn't have been easy fitting this all into a short chapter but I think you made it work pretty well:) and congrats on using the prompts, you incorporated them all in nicely!

-Amanda

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