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Review:dracodarlingxx says:
oh my god i didn't realise chapter 17 was up! i got to read two new chapters at once! honey, you just made my day xxx :D :D
but back to this chapter:
i goddamn nearly cried at the ending
the chapter title just sums it all up
their friendship is falling apart when they're so codependent on each other, so who will they call when they get their panic attacks? :'( :'(
loving the prank talk again, you always keep to the main subject of the story plus all the stuff going on in the side, part of the reason why i love this fic :*
but then Holly was a bit mean to Al, and he was kinda sensitive 'cos he's a frikkin' genius and he should know it, but I do sympathise after Rose explained how he always gets made fun of for preferring the humanities.
this chapter made me think about my own friendships, you know?
and then Holly's sad about her dad and the chemistry course and NEWTs, and Lester's moved out of his house.
and Scorpius
that was just plain mean -_-
god, i'm going to cry again.

please update soon, i need Scor to be happy again D: D:

Author's Response: I'm glad I could make your day! (and then possibly break it again - I'm sorry!)

I have no words in my defence, except YES I KNOW I'M SORRY I LOVE THEM TOO MY BABIES and this came out of nowhere for me as well, especially Albus and Scorpius - though Holly also blindsided me a bit with her comment to Albus and Albus blindsided me with his reaction and it was just a very surprising chapter all round.

I'm normally terrible with plot, so I'm kind of impressed that I've managed to keep a plot going throughout this whole thing, to be honest. There will be more prank stuff - it's not just all angst from here on out, though obviously everyone's got their issues that they need to be working out and the whole structure of the group has really been dealt quite a blow from this.

Scorpius is my baby too. I mean, I don't like to pick favourites, but I also made him a linguist who reads Greek and Latin so I couldn't really help it. I hope he's happy again too. I don't really have any control over these characters anymore. Fingers crossed.

Update should be coming this weekend, unless I blatantly ignore my exam this week and get it up earlier. Hope to see you back for it!

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