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Review:marauderfan says:

Wow, great job with the tense, scary mood for the first section of the chapter. I think it really shows how Draco might believe some of the same things about Mudbloods that the rest of the Desth Eaters think, but he isn't willing to commit the same crimes they are. He's all talk, for as much as he says Mudbloods are scum, he doesn't want to kill them, and even doesn't want them to die. I imagine that memory of that screaming woman and her daughter really changed him. What a horrible thing to have on his conscience, and definitely something Astoria wouldn't understand as she wasn't a Death Eater.

Astoria doesn't seem very nice, despite Draco saying she's funny. I suppose all we've really seen of her is kind of like the side of Draco that he left behind in Azkaban. It looks like Astoria hasn't changed since the war, but Draco has. She seems, if anything, darker, what with her wanting Hermione dead, as if she's bitter her side i.e. Voldemorts side lost in the war. I guess this will begin to make their relationship difficult, though I'm surprised it hasn't already. But I guess if most of their relationship has been just corresponding through letters while he was in prison, there are things that they didnt realise about each other until now. Time will tell I suppose!

great chapter!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for coming back and reviewing again! :D I'm glad you liked it and the detail I put in it. I especially like that you think it's a good chapter. Thanks again :D

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