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Review:lumos_knox says:
Hello, I'm here for the review swap!

I'm really it took me so long to get here...

Anyway, you've got a brilliant story beginning here. You've got the right amounts of everything- descriptions, adjectives, etc. I'm loving the plot line, and how you introduced Malfoy early, and Hermione's very small view of him. I felt sorry for Malfoy at the line "you should have seen his face" because it means he was probably seriously distraught.

Dun, dun dun to Lavender Brown! I never liked her much AT ALL. Now, she's back, and something's going to happen and she's going to be in the thick of it. I just KNOW IT. To Won Won? This has got to mean serious trouble. As for Hermione losing Ron's spark... it makes me really sad to see that relationship coming to an end.

Ron, you idiot, can't you see what's happening to Hermione? Stop owling Lavender! :) Ron's always been naive like that, it's just him, but he's got to know that he's hurting Hermione... :(

As for CC... there isn't much. I'd just do a few grammar checks, but otherwise, everything else was great! Keep up the fantastic work.

- lumos_knox

Author's Response: Hey lumos,
Wow, thank you so much for the sweet review! And that's okay about the wait I didn't mind! :D
I am so glad you liked it. I hope you eventually come back for more and read to see what happens to Ron and Hermione because they aren't breaking up just yet ;)

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