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Review:marauderfan says:
Wow. So.. hangover and then finding out that Malfoy is your neighbour - that's got to rank up there on the list of terrible mornings. Poor Hermione! I do not envy her.

I like the way you've written both Draco and Hermione. Hermione is very assertive and businesslike, exactly how I'd imagine her at a Ministry job. I like how you've described her job too. It seems like an important and necessary job. And Draco is really well portrayed too. Rather than being civil to her like he was at the pub the previous night, he's a lot more bitter and defensive here which is fitting because Hermione is his superior in this job, which he's obviously furious about. So great job writing that dynamic.

That scene where the woman recognised Draco as one of the men who was there when her husband was killed - that was so intense and a really good scene. He must be going through a lot. I wonder if he will ever talk to Hermione about it - she did try to cover for him there, even if it was just to save face for the Ministry.

wonderful chapter! Thanks for the swap!

Author's Response: Hey there!
I am so glad you enjoyed reading this chapter! :) I hope I can get another review from you soon!!! :D
Thanks sooo much!

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