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Review:toomanycurls says:
Ick - hangovers. I like to pretend wizards have a potion for that. :D

hahaha, it is Hermione's luck that she'd get Draco as a neighbor. :-o I hope she doesn't end up breaking him and Astoria up - then she'd be just as bad as Lav. I'm dying over here. This has to be a horrible day for Hermione. :D And I'm kind of loving her mysery.

Dude, I'm kind of surprised (well, maybe not) that Draco would be so venemous to Hermione at work. Not when he's an ex-con, well, death eather. Though, it is fitting for him. I can't beleive he'd pick a fight with her like that over the case. I wonder if he'd do that if Harry were there.

Hermione has a great official/police voice going on. She sounds very official. I guess having Draco along could cause that kind of issue. I bet poor Draco has to face that quite a lot though. :-/ (I only kind of feel sorry for him.) I imagine that if he were involved in her husband's death, he was doing it against his will. A lot of what Draco did during the last bit of the war was just to keep alive.

You're digging them quite a hole to get out of. I'll be interested to see how they build up from here!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hey Rose! :)
Thanks for the review. I am glad that you seem interested in the story and I am happy that I am doing pretty well with characterization because as you know, I struggled with that before.
I like digging holes in my stories :P it makes it a little more interesting I think. I hope you can come back and read on.


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