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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hi Lindsey, here for the review swap!

My, my, my. Hermione has had a rough couple of days, has she not? First, Ron is a total jerk to her - and basically runs out on her to be with Lavender. Then, she had a hard time at the Leaky Cauldron and wakes up with a hangover. Then she finds out that Malfoy, her worst enemy, is her neighbor AND her coworker. Aarrgh! I think she deserves SOMETHING good to happen to her!

I love the banter you have going between Hermione and Draco. You've stayed true to character. The two absolutely detest each other, and that is obvious. I really liked your dialogue, when they were going back and forth. Hermione is not about to let Draco win and he is far to proud to admit that she is is superior.

I also really liked the way you described Hermione's job. It is entirely possible that there would be someone at the ministry who needs to sort through all of the cases and decide which ones are severe enough to hand off to the auror department and which ones are minor and can be handled more quickly.

Draco obviously has some sort of a secret. Did he help kill innocents during the war? I wonder if Astoria knows, or if it is too dark for him to share with her. Hmmm... I am intrigued.

Good job developing the mystery here! I can't wait to read more!

Beth

Author's Response: Hey Beth! Yay! Another awesome review from you!!! :)
I am very happy that you feel I am doing good with the dramione pacing... because I have been working hard to make this story a bit believable. I am also glad that you enjoyed Hermione's job description because I too think it would make sense for there to be a department where they have to sort out cases. :) and I also can see that Hermione maybe doesn't want to be an Auror like everyone else, maybe she wants to do something a little different than her best friend and boyfriend because Ron and Hermione already live together, so I would probably not want to work with my husband (in her case bf) either. Thanks again for a lovely review Beth, you are awesome! I will go and re-request whenever I can.
-Lindsey


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