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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hello!!!

Sorry it took me all day to get back to this.

I really enjoyed your imagery in this chapter and the way you described the dementors at the beginning. I was curious about why they weren't going to use the Patronus Charm on the dementors. You might have explained that but I missed it.

Ooh, the other bit of description I really liked was "more aware than a sneakoscope" to describe their level of tension. It's just perfect and speaks volumes (plus uses a HP-related word). I hope that Imogen does stay in touch with Arian and Maeve (if she makes it). Imogen doesn't really have much of a family anymore.

It was really exciting to get more information about what they're doing and why they're going where they're going. It also helped explain a bit of hte mythology they're working with. The scene with Liana was intense. I'm glad Imogen didn't give up the stones (or promise to give them up) but I'm hoping Liana won't kill everyone she loves. :( I was so excited that Imogen was able to do magic again!! She just needed the right provocation I guess. :P

I really feel like the plot is kicking into gear!

Great chapter

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi there!!

OK, I will be honest, sometimes I get so caught up in trying to make the plot a bit unorthodox - that I completely forget about the most obvious solution - a patronus charm *kicks my self* :P

You'll have to keep reading to find out - hehe - but Arian and Maeve do have equally important roles to play in the story!

Writing the scene with Liana was difficult but I'm glad you liked it and that the plot is finally starting to unfold!

Thanks for the lovely review!

Bella x


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