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Review:cathpath says:
What a perfect setting for romance! Please keep writing, I want to know what happens!! I LOVE that Hermione is getting a chance at passionate love. She's sassy and deserves a (handsome, broad shouldered..) man who can give her that. Lol
So I guess Draco changed his mind about how best to keep Hermione the park, he was offhand in the hopes of stopping her from falling for him, but now he is going on a date with her? Not that I am trying to pick holes, I love that they are having a 'proper date'. Adorable! Who knew Draco was such a sweetheart, gentle under the facade.

Gosh, they're in so much danger! Draco will have to be very careful with his thoughts around the deatheaters..perhaps he will spend more time with Hermione to get away from the probing curiousity of Bella?

And of course, at some point Draco will have to take Hermione on a midnight stroll. No? Be sure to keep up the teasing tone between the two of them. Draco needs to be cheeky so that Hermione can get wound up, or perhaps a little flustered? I guess the more comfortable Draco becomes in her company, the more he will relax. I'm not sure what I'm trying to say..perhaps I like it when they have little spats!

Author's Response: Why thank you! So so so much. I've always wanted to write a truly romantic story for Hermione... I feel like she's deserving of so much and to me, despite their differences, Hermione and Draco really are well-suited for one another and I feel like over time they could truly develop something nice.

That's how I always imagined him. And I know to some that's way out of character but to me I like to think he really is this sweet guy, following in his mother's teachings rather than his father's despite the face he puts on for everyone else- his own Death Eater's mask if you will. I think he has his moments of determination, he can't deny his feelings for her but wants her safe, and other times wants nothing more than to divulge in his own selfish desires.

I love the teasing tone, I feel like it's necessary between the two of them. Without it they wouldn't be them!

Thank you so much for your kind words and for really telling me what you like and want to see more of throughout this story. It means so much to me, I can't even begin to tell you. This is one of the best reviews I've received in ages. Thank you.


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