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Review:lindslo2012 says:
Hello there,
Here for your requested review!
I was hooked from the very beginning and felt a little bit of fear too while I read it. This Kaspar man is evil and deserves to be in prison with the rest of the Death Eaters. I felt bad for the poor girl who came with the clipboard... I mean gee, she really might have just wanted the owner of the house to answer a few questions. That is why I don't have a job like that- so I never run into a Death Eater at a random person's house. Joking of course but I thought it was kind of funny.
As usual, your chapter had a very clear plot and very good detail.
I always enjoy a story with alot of detail because I can always get more into it that way and I understand the story alot more than I would with less detail.
It was sick of him to make the poor girl do what she did but I am glad that in the end she got him back.
I am curious to see how the DA members (now Aurors) are up to in your story- so that means you have to come back and re-request! I think this story is going to be really good and I can't wait to read more. As usual, wonderful job!!!
Until next time,

Author's Response: Hi, there!

So to be honest, I'm having this odd feeling of remorse where Kaspar is concerned. I really did put quite a bit of thought into him. I tweaked and rewrote parts of his inner monologue a few times to try to make him as amoral and menacing as possible. I'm quite happy with the outcome, but here's the thing: he's done. He spends the rest of the story in a Ministry holding cell. It feels like kind of a waste. Still, I'm glad he worked for you as an antagonist.

Details, details, details. I'm a huge believer that they go a long way toward selling a story by helping the reader immerse. Very glad you feel that way.

Oh, she gets him back with a vengeance. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter if that's what you want to see. In fact, I think I'll go re-request. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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