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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Gina, here with your first review!

Aw, I really love Albusí character heís just so relatable and sweet and I really have to applaud you for your ability to write a teenage boy so well! I really liked the letter as that revealed another side to him as we hadnít really seen him talking or writing I should say to his parents until then so it was nice to be able to understand their relationship as I always do wonder what it was like. I mean, the bit about man stuff was just great :P

I definitely agree with Joel and Vanessa about something bothering Albus because while it is expected that he would react from the note, it does seem that he might be affected by this because of another reason. I hope the next chapter is up soon because I really need to know who this person is and what connection she has to Albus as itís so intriguing!

Ooh a prank war sounds fun! It sounds as if these guys are very experienced in this area so I canít wait to see what they get up to. I know Iíve said it before, but I love it when Albus does the pros and cons in his head as it just makes it so much more varied and fun to read as I love it when writers include different techniques into their work.

The ending was mysterious! Even though it all points to Joel doing it because of the prank war and stuff, I have a feeling itís not him but the mysterious D.L.Z. instead as it just fits better in my head for some reason. Ah, please say the next chapter is up soonish as I really want to find out now especially after that last incident!

Great chapter, Gina!


Author's Response: Kiana!

So I feel stupid replying to this review a year later because I have edited this chapter SO MUCH that some of the things in this review are now extinct. But I want you to know that I appreciate everything you said and, whether you know it or not, you helped me decide what to keep and what to change. So thank you.

I don't know if you're still around, but the D.L.Z. chapter is up now, so if you want to take a look... *nudge nudge*


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