Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:patronus_charm says:
Yay, the final chapter and hahaha I beat Nadia :D

Wah, you included Scorose! I loved Rose she really made me laugh and you developed her character really well for the short space of time she appeared in. It was just lines like this ĎThe skirt had been her motherís idea; never would Rose Weasley willingly choose to wear one when a comfortable pair of jeans were an optioní which meant we really got to know her and see glimpses of both parents in her.

I really liked the whole setting before, because there was poor Rose feeling all shy and awkward as Astoria and Scorpius just chatted away, and even Draco seemed to feel a little awkward too which is natural I guess and then chaos just exploded everywhere! I guess having things like this ĎDraco Malfoy pirouetted into the room, a frilly pink pinafore tied around his waist,í and this ĎDraco began to boom out a power balladí meant that the awkwardness of the whole event was greatly reduced and the curse probably helped them all grow closer to one another actually.

You just wrote the whole chaos scene really well and it was just so much fun to read, as tons of things were going on and I almost didnít know what to imagine in my head as it was just all so crazy and great too though!

Haha, Dumbledore! Now I think about it, Iím not too surprised actually as it does seem like something he would do and I can actually see it from his point of view and I think itís a really great idea! I loved the snarky comments from Snape and Armando though as they just showed why Dumbledore is amazing because only a very few amount of people can understand his actions!

This was a great story, Sian, and congrats on finishing it!


Author's Response: Hey Kiana! Haha yes, you got first review :D

I did, I did! It was fun to include them in something like this because even though they're not my OTP, I do like them together but I don't know if I'd write about them in other stories. I'm glad you liked the way that I wrote Rose's character here, because I've never tried to write her properly before!

Yes, it was really awkward for them all at the beginning, especially poor Rose when the others were chatting, but then the curse came and just swept all sorts of awkwardness away! It was so fun to imagine all of the crazy things that happened, taking the prompts as a starting point and probably having too much fun imagining stupid things for Draco to do.

I realised about two chapters in that I'd mentioned the curse but hadn't come up with an explanation, but Dumbledore was so calm and enjoyed it so much when it struck at Hogwarts that I thought he could have been the one to start the curse, and I'm glad you thought it was believable! I'm so happy I finally finished this and thank you so much for reading and reviewing it all! ♥

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 848
Submit Report: