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Review:newgenerationlover says:
Hi there! Saw you wrote this for the one quote challenge and thought I would check out my competition ;)

So, I had a mini heart attack at first because of your summary being about why you didn't want to fall in love with a veela and I thought we wrote like the same thing, but then I was pleasantly surprised on your take on the veela gene. I thought you did a great job writing from the POV of Victiore, a person who can't really control her magic. You can kinda draw a parallel with Dumbledore's sister (sorry, having a brain fart at the moment and can't remember her name), but probably with more coherent thoughts.

I liked how you showed her go through all those different methods to try to calm down, but in the end, it was Jack that was the true thing that could calm her dow. I liked how you put the little snippets of her life, like the scene with her teacher, to show us what her life has been like instead of just telling us. You did what my english teacher always tells us students to do, "Show, don't tell!" Kudos to you. I thought your writing was very good and the story lines flowed right into each other. I can tell you spent time figuring that out and it really adds to the story. All in all, great job! You should be proud of this!

Mary

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