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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Adi, as you hadnít gotten back to me about reviews, I hope itís ok to just choose anything! :)

Wow this was such a moving story and really made me look at Myrtle in a different light. I never thought about all the things she would miss out on by being a ghost as she always seemed to be too fixated on her death to care for much else but this truly revealed another side to her. The most heart-breaking thing was when she was talking about never having children and I was just like ahaha, Myrtle donít be sad, and it just really made me think of her in another light as someone with emotions.

You had some really beautiful description in here too! Like here ĎAs the light loses its virgin freshness, and the heat begins to shine through,í and ĎI am reminded of how glorious the warmth of the light feels on my naked skiní they seemed so pure and lovely if that makes any sort of sense and you carried them throughout the story and it just made it so much more enjoyable to read with them. Ack I forgot this line ĎA single milky tear runs down my cheek.í That was really great and just made me want to hug her as her life really wasnít that much at that point.

Another thing which I found really interesting was how you emphasised how her life would just carry on and on and on and people would die but she would always be there. It was the bit about waiting for the next Golden Trio and Draco which made me realise that, and it just made the story so much more poignant. In one way, it was a happy memory as she enjoyed their company but then it was so sad how reliant she was on people visiting her for a bit of joy in her life.

This was such a brilliant one-shot, Adi!

-Kiana

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