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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi again!

I liked learning more about Thackeray and Roxanneís families as it was interesting to see how much they contrasted. I love the sound of Thackerayís parents though as they just sound so cool with the way they thought having a magical child was the best thing ever. Iím not too sure about the whole idea of giving Dumbledoreís body back to nature, I mean, knowing him he would probably prefer it as he was a bit of a hippie but it seems as if youíre touching a God like thing. Also, again, I have to congratulate on making the Weasley family different as Iíve seen you write them several times, but again, this was another different version of them.

Aw, the bit with James as so touching! I never saw him being gay coming but I really liked how you included it and an not so pleasant reaction to it as we rarely see that in FF. (also, random side note but I love how James is going out with someone called Jameson!). It just made me sad how horribly people can react to things like that, but luckily he had Thackeray who put him straight and Iím really starting to like he/she (pronoun use is still confusing me!). I guess we can be grateful that one good thing came out of the whole incident with James and Thackeray being nice to each other.

Ah the Thackeray and Roxanne fluffy moment was so cute and sweet and the way Roxanne started being honest with Thackeray about what she thought of he/she at the beginning as it just showed how far they had come and when they kissed it was just ♥

Wah the ending bit was just so lovely and magical as it really seems as if Thackeray and Roxanne are meant to be. It was really nice to see Thackeray open up a lot more because I know he/she can be very open with her general views on things, but when it comes to personal things he/she tends to be more closed off so it was a really special moment to see her tell Roxanne about her brother though it made the story have even more feels!

Great chapter, Jenna :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi Kiana! :)

I'm glad you liked the families - I didn't really plan to write about them, but Thackeray's family especially formed a real head canon in my mind. Haha, the whole Dumbledore thing is supposed to be a bit ridiculous and the sort of issue only Thackeray would think of, but that's what makes it fun, and yeah I agree about going near his body. it's all a little morbid. :P And thank you! You know, before I started writing next gen I never thought I would be able to write the Weasley family, but it's fun to imagine the different dynamics even in a short story like this.

Yes! James was always going to be gay in my head canon of this story (and in a few other stories for some reason) but it ended up becoming a more crucial plot point than I originally thought. And yes, Thackeray is the no-nonsense sort when it comes to other people. :P I'm glad you liked all of that and how it showed a more difficult side to coming out, I really enjoyed writing his relationship. :)

Yay! I love first kiss scenes, they're so cute to write. I'm glad you liked it!

Yes, that's Thackeray exactly! Despite being quite outspoken and open Thackeray doesn't talk very easily about personal things and memories. The story with Swift is so difficult as well for Thackeray to talk about so it's a mark of the trust and respect between them.

Thanks so much, Kiana! :) I'm loving replying to your thoughts on this! :D


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